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Post reblogged from Climbing Out of the Cardboard Box with 2 notes
Memories
Memories are best forgotten,
They tie me to the earth.
And every time I turn my head,
They uphold me to my birth.
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Memories are best forgotten,
They reveal my darkest past.
The things I seek I cannot find,
Will lead me to last.
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Meh … I still say its missing some things. Anyones up for grabs on this if they have a suggestion.
I like it… maybe add a third stanza, maybe add a word (like which) to the last night there or play with the last two lines. I’m not really good there.
Yeah … .but what is the question … .hm … . I’ll give it some more time and thought.
Source: ephah
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ephah reblogged this from creampaws and added:
Yeah … .but what is the question … .hm … . I’ll give it some more time and thought.
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creampaws reblogged this from ephah and added:
like it… maybe add...third stanza, maybe add a word (like which) to the last night there...
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